Comments on: Easter http://www.pulu.org/blog/2005/03/31/easter/ Sat, 19 May 2012 20:09:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: . http://www.pulu.org/blog/2005/03/31/easter/#comment-27 . Fri, 01 Apr 2005 11:06:00 +0000 http://www.pulu.org/blog/?p=26#comment-27 Hmm.. It's your english teacher here, a few things that you might consider writing differently: 1. Snow defreezed > ok point is clear, but perhaps you could use a word like 'melted'...or say that "..before the snow had melted too much." 2.navigation rull > once again point is clear but I think nokia calls it a navigation wheel and even if they don't, wheel would be a fitting description. And one other thing I noticed that since you work with your computer, can you really say that you have no time for it? and yes I realise that you meant that you have no time for things you would like to do. ...ohwell, what a boring comment this is,sorry for beign such a bitch =] Take it eazey man, even how busy you are, time used never comes back =] .Sathy Hmm..
It’s your english teacher here, a few things that you might consider writing differently:

1. Snow defreezed > ok point is clear, but perhaps you could use a word like ‘melted’…or say that “..before the snow had melted too much.”

2.navigation rull > once again point is clear but I think nokia calls it a navigation wheel and even if they don’t, wheel would be a fitting description.

And one other thing I noticed that since you work with your computer, can you really say that you have no time for it? and yes I realise that you meant that you have no time for things you would like to do.
…ohwell, what a boring comment this is,sorry for beign such a bitch =]

Take it eazey man, even how busy you are, time used never comes back =]

.Sathy

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